I can't say much about Kelly's overall plan for her project because it is meant to be kept secret. It is completely essential to her project and is something to be unveiled during the thesis exhibit. I think in creating her work, she should keep in mind that she should make it as concise as possible to the viewer. As a design and photography double concentration, Kelly is choosing to merge the two in order to create a sort of information graphic that includes photos. The photos, I feel, do not have to be fine art photos but be better suited as vernacular photos that have the equivalent skill level of a snapshot. Such aspects as the composition and light should not been take too much into account because it is important that the "performance" aspect of the photo be the center of attention.
She should think about clever titles. Her project includes work with facebook and other online social media sites so it may be clever to create a pun out of the text used for any of the sites that she works with. I look forward to seeing this piece in its entirety because it is something that will be revolutionary, both in the sense of creating a public service announcement geared toward the issue at large and in the sense that it will be part of a trend of future artwork that relates that the main issue. Good job Kelly!
Photo Grid
Monday, February 21, 2011
Saturday, February 12, 2011
New Thesis Under Way!
So, as you may know, I have completely changed my thesis within the past couple of weeks to something that is dramatically different from my pervious idea, and is something that I think will be definitely worth the change. I have chosen to still stick within something that relates to psychology since I am so interested in it. Like I mentioned in my critique response, I wish to explore the idea of telling and keeping secrets. Over the past couple of weeks, I have collected numerous secrets by means of Facebook, text message, and a Formspring account. Formspring is a website in which I am required to create a profile and people have the opportunity to post on it anonymously without disclosing any personal information. So far, I feel that this has been the most successful in gathering deeper and darker secrets. I have collected over 100 and plan to keep going while I make my images.
http://www.formspring.com/dpozsony
Check them out on here and post !!
I have been shooting over the past couple of days and plan to post my progress when it comes. Until then I'll be submerging myself in an eternity's worth of secrets. See you then!
http://www.formspring.com/dpozsony
Check them out on here and post !!
I have been shooting over the past couple of days and plan to post my progress when it comes. Until then I'll be submerging myself in an eternity's worth of secrets. See you then!
Saturday, February 5, 2011
My Critique Response for Friday Feb. 4th
Today I presented my NEW thesis idea. Although I didn't have photos to show, which is my concentration and will be a part of my show, my group was receptive to the necessary preliminary work that I had been doing. For my project I am planning to collect secrets and display them in the gallery, some of which will be done through the use of photography. For the first major stage of the project, which I have been doing for the past 2 weeks is collect the secrets that would be used in the gallery. At this point I have collected over 110 and hope to get many more.
Derek, our leader in discussion posed many curious questions about my work that made me think of it from different viewpoints that I had not yet contemplated. One thing he mentioned was that I should think of my role in this project. What he meant was that I could view myself as a collaborator with the people who confide their secrets in me or I could be seen as a facilitator of thoughts. My response was that I felt I was both. I am a collaborator with these people in the sense that the project would not exist without them. I am actually dependent on their responses in order to create my art. What is feel stronger about though, is myself as a facilitator. I am facilitating ideas and private thoughts by means of the internet. Without being put in this role, I don't think that people would willingly tell their secrets.
In my plans so far, my idea consists of 5-6 photos aligned horizontally with the remainder of the wall space filled up with the rest of the secrets that I have. My idea was to put the remainder on Post Its in order to lessen the seriousness of the secrets themselves. I am open to other ideas but this is what I have so far. If I go through with the Post It idea, there was a very interesting comment made that I should contemplate. It was said that I should think about whether or not I want to document the Post Its and have them exist far past the project's life in the gallery or whether I want for them to be lost forever after the show is taken down. I am still thinking about how I feel about this comment and am not sure which route I wish to take. A further idea was to make a book of all the secrets.
Another interesting point made was that I may want to think about engaging the viewers by having them write their own secrets and posting them. One thing I thought to be problematic was the idea that some may not take it serious and post something trying to be a jerk. Also, for the sake of privacy, I think some may be hesitant to post s secret when there are others walking in such close proximity to them. I do, however, think it may b a good idea to involve viewers. It may be something that further strengthens my piece.
Check my progress so far with my collection and feel free to post anonymously! Remember, there are more that were given to me through Facebook, word of mouth or are mine so theyre not listed on the site.
http://www.formspringme.com/dpozsony
Derek, our leader in discussion posed many curious questions about my work that made me think of it from different viewpoints that I had not yet contemplated. One thing he mentioned was that I should think of my role in this project. What he meant was that I could view myself as a collaborator with the people who confide their secrets in me or I could be seen as a facilitator of thoughts. My response was that I felt I was both. I am a collaborator with these people in the sense that the project would not exist without them. I am actually dependent on their responses in order to create my art. What is feel stronger about though, is myself as a facilitator. I am facilitating ideas and private thoughts by means of the internet. Without being put in this role, I don't think that people would willingly tell their secrets.
In my plans so far, my idea consists of 5-6 photos aligned horizontally with the remainder of the wall space filled up with the rest of the secrets that I have. My idea was to put the remainder on Post Its in order to lessen the seriousness of the secrets themselves. I am open to other ideas but this is what I have so far. If I go through with the Post It idea, there was a very interesting comment made that I should contemplate. It was said that I should think about whether or not I want to document the Post Its and have them exist far past the project's life in the gallery or whether I want for them to be lost forever after the show is taken down. I am still thinking about how I feel about this comment and am not sure which route I wish to take. A further idea was to make a book of all the secrets.
Another interesting point made was that I may want to think about engaging the viewers by having them write their own secrets and posting them. One thing I thought to be problematic was the idea that some may not take it serious and post something trying to be a jerk. Also, for the sake of privacy, I think some may be hesitant to post s secret when there are others walking in such close proximity to them. I do, however, think it may b a good idea to involve viewers. It may be something that further strengthens my piece.
Check my progress so far with my collection and feel free to post anonymously! Remember, there are more that were given to me through Facebook, word of mouth or are mine so theyre not listed on the site.
http://www.formspringme.com/dpozsony
Tuesday, February 1, 2011
Critique Response to Lauren Morich's Crit
I have to say that I really enjoyed the fact that she have stayed committed to the project for over a year so I hope she is able to get something meaningful out of it since she put the effort in. When looking at what she described as being your criteria for what she wants, it is mentioned that she wants to take the tags out of context when she displays them. I think it may be in the best interest of the project to display the tags in such a way that makes them not look like how they do in the store. Maybe she can make a larger installation of all of the tags collectively. It may be something to think of. She should also try to think about what she wants to say about consumerism. A good start may be to think about whether or not she wants it to be a negative or positive commentary on consumerism. She may also want to think about her personal experiences with consumerism since she is a consumer. She is bound to have existing opinions of being a consumer so why not try to fully lay out how she feels about the topic itself. Another idea may to freely write out her ideas in a notebook or something like that and see where evolves.
Critique Response to Gorav Panchal's Crit
(Also appears on his blog)
I thought that his idea was very revolutionary since technology has become so fundamental in day to day living all because of the smartphone. I thought it was great feedback when someone mentioned that it may be useful to make negative commentary on having a smartphone because I feel that it goes better with his main idea of commenting on how people are so disconnected from one another because of a stupid phone. Rather than isolate the people who do not have smart phones, maybe he could find a way to make them feel more included in the project and even more empowered that they DONT have a smart phone.
Something he mentioned was that he wants people to get involved with his project. A way to do that may be to create a sort of "advertisement" for your project. Maybe he can start by posting things around mason gross that require a person to use their phone to go to a specific website that may have information about the exhibit or whatever other information he wants to disclose...almost like a sort of prequel to the work. There was a student who posted things around Mason Gross possibly a month or so before their exhibit opened last year. It was something that related to their project and there may still be signs up for it...There was a sign on the tech help desk in the computer lab that read, "reserved for 7 minutes in heaven." Other posts were witty comments that had to do with where they were posted around the gallery and Mason Gross. I'm not sure how much extra work that would be but I thought if it's possible then it may be something that will help out. It's a very interesting idea and I hope that he keeps going in a positive direction with it.
I thought that his idea was very revolutionary since technology has become so fundamental in day to day living all because of the smartphone. I thought it was great feedback when someone mentioned that it may be useful to make negative commentary on having a smartphone because I feel that it goes better with his main idea of commenting on how people are so disconnected from one another because of a stupid phone. Rather than isolate the people who do not have smart phones, maybe he could find a way to make them feel more included in the project and even more empowered that they DONT have a smart phone.
Something he mentioned was that he wants people to get involved with his project. A way to do that may be to create a sort of "advertisement" for your project. Maybe he can start by posting things around mason gross that require a person to use their phone to go to a specific website that may have information about the exhibit or whatever other information he wants to disclose...almost like a sort of prequel to the work. There was a student who posted things around Mason Gross possibly a month or so before their exhibit opened last year. It was something that related to their project and there may still be signs up for it...There was a sign on the tech help desk in the computer lab that read, "reserved for 7 minutes in heaven." Other posts were witty comments that had to do with where they were posted around the gallery and Mason Gross. I'm not sure how much extra work that would be but I thought if it's possible then it may be something that will help out. It's a very interesting idea and I hope that he keeps going in a positive direction with it.
Critique Response to Kelly O'Leary's Crit
(I couldn't figure out how to post this on her blog)
On Friday we saw Kelly's work which is about privacy on the internet. Her idea was to follow a fellow student by means of the internet and display it in the gallery. I think it is both valuable and ambitious. It is something I believe should be started in order for it to develop into its full potential. I like the idea because is deals directly with a major part of pop culture, which is Facebook. It has become something that is causing for technology to evolve in a way that not only makes cyber life more simple but at the same time exploits our identities. To me, this project seems like a PSA, which I believe may be the original root of the project. I think this is something that would prove to be beneficial to viewers to take away from the gallery because usually Facebook is praised for making life easier, giving people the opportunity to remain connected and establish connections. It is not exposed for the negative aspects that exist such as easy accessibility to one's identity, location, etc.
When thinking about a layout for the gallery, it may be interesting to set the piece up as a Facebook page. It would give people the chance to identify the Facebook logo, which will attract them to the piece but upon contact, they will see that Facebook has the ability to become a monster and be something negative. I wish Kelly good luck in her project and I hope that the end result is what she hopes for it to be. The idea is very powerful and has the ability to be something that is very informative and groundbreaking if the proper time is put into it.
On Friday we saw Kelly's work which is about privacy on the internet. Her idea was to follow a fellow student by means of the internet and display it in the gallery. I think it is both valuable and ambitious. It is something I believe should be started in order for it to develop into its full potential. I like the idea because is deals directly with a major part of pop culture, which is Facebook. It has become something that is causing for technology to evolve in a way that not only makes cyber life more simple but at the same time exploits our identities. To me, this project seems like a PSA, which I believe may be the original root of the project. I think this is something that would prove to be beneficial to viewers to take away from the gallery because usually Facebook is praised for making life easier, giving people the opportunity to remain connected and establish connections. It is not exposed for the negative aspects that exist such as easy accessibility to one's identity, location, etc.
When thinking about a layout for the gallery, it may be interesting to set the piece up as a Facebook page. It would give people the chance to identify the Facebook logo, which will attract them to the piece but upon contact, they will see that Facebook has the ability to become a monster and be something negative. I wish Kelly good luck in her project and I hope that the end result is what she hopes for it to be. The idea is very powerful and has the ability to be something that is very informative and groundbreaking if the proper time is put into it.
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